yo looks good but you might want to fix the lighting on the characters. The overhead light should cast reflected light on joel and highlights from the window light should be along the edges of their clothing. Doing this will prevent the characters from looking like they have just been cropped in. Other then that the sizing looks great and the composition is good as well! fantastic job.
awesome drawing! i love the last of us and i hope they come out with a sequel! i'm starting to write a fanfic and it'll be on my page soon if you want to check it out! but warning: you have to finish the game in order to understand it because i start it off from right after the end